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Spark Your Creativity #21 (Write An Animotion Poem)
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Old 07-31-2008, 11:59 PM
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Woohoo!! Sarah is on a roll! Moonchild I just LOVE LOVE the kitten picture...it's darling! Everyone has out done themselves!!! I don't really know how you can out do yourself, but I'm gonna use it because everything is so fantastic!!!

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Old 08-01-2008, 03:18 AM
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Temptation

is an angler fish
wiggling your greatest
desires just out of
reach. The darkness
cloaks his needle
point teeth and
large eyes that
watch your every
move. He lures
you away from the
safety of light,
snapping jaws
shut when you
least expect it.
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Old 08-02-2008, 04:08 PM
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Hurt

is a Spotted-Zebra
running running running
from everything and everyone
not having much fun
unresolved childhood issues
caused him to run run run
from everything and everyone
while not having fun
other animals teased him
about his spots
which made him think of himself
as not really all that hot
he thought on day that he could
change his spots to stripes
then everything would be alright
or okay...
But can a zebra change his spots?
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Old 08-03-2008, 04:48 PM
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I'm luvin' this idea!!..indeed animals and humans share infinite similarities!!
..

ANGER

errupts like the roar of lion
prancing around like a king
until it spots its prey
"keepy ya eye on the prize"
is what goes on in it's mind
focusing only on it's goal
"slow and steady, steady and slow"
until...BOOM!..ATTACK!... on the unexpecting prey.
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Old 08-06-2008, 03:57 PM
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Pride

is a prancing horse
dancing with such grace
and beauty it is as if
she is floating on clouds
as she moves. Each step
is with a delicate pause,
head is held high, arching
her neck like a graceful swan.
Flowing hair flies in the air that
is created from the propulsion of
her picking up the speed.
She raises her tail in the air,
daring you to look away.

That is a really good poem. that is how a horse is, they are really prideful. Good job.

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Old 08-06-2008, 04:02 PM
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Prideful

Is a bantam rooster strutting
before his harem
head thrusting forward
then back
red comb swaying
with each step
as a shadow creeps up behind him.


That is really good mom. Its funny to. Roosters do act prideful. good job. love ya jess

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Old 08-24-2008, 08:35 AM
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heartache..
a fly that keeps banging into the light -
a forbidden love, blocked by barrier
yet he stills perservere
yearned one day to break it
to crack it, to smash it,
to get the love he wants -
the only light in the darkness of loneliness
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Old 08-28-2008, 04:51 AM
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Lethargy

Lazy
As a stoned kola
Munching leaves all day,
Like screaming how the hell are YA!
From the couch on which you lay,
Cause you could not be bothered
Moving a limb to greet,
Family, a friend, a hobbit
Or simply get to your feet.
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Old 08-29-2008, 01:05 AM
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Dedicated

is my golden-crowned Lion.
He's erect by my side, proud
and pompous, for he knows
that as his Lioness we will
rule the world together.

Husband of love dedication,
Owner of my forest he dedicatedly
protects. Erect he stands
as my Lover-Friend-Champion,
promised to me when we were
Adam & Eve.
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Old 10-08-2008, 04:43 AM
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I've not written a dang thing in nearly a year, so I'm really feeling rusty! More so now, after reading all of these fantastic animotion poems! Since there is no better way to get back into writing after such a long hiatus than with these creative outlet challenges, here is my effort to meet it:


Magical

is the mythical unicorn.
Dancing, prancing, bold. Single horn
betwix his liquid eyes of gold,
that search out virgin maids of old.
Oh, to be pure enough to see
a blessing of unicorns,
coming for me!

~~~~~~~~~~


Obnoxious


is a gaggle of geese,
all pecking and pushing each other around,
like Christmas shoppers when a sale is found.
Their honking makes a grating sound,
like a landlord breaking your lease!

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