Spark Your Creativity #6 (CinqTroisDecaLa Rhyme Challenge) - Page 3

nomadicrhymer · #20 02-09-2007, 12:16 AM

No, no, no, Ms. J....never thunk it!! but I wasn't sure of the whole layout, I had missed the whole CCC thing in the middle, at first, and was scrambling at the end, so valid question, Madam Queen Poetess! This was a pretty good challenge! I enjoyed it tremendously.

Nomad

MsJacquiiC · #21 02-09-2007, 03:38 AM

LOL - OK THERESE - I was just messin

But really speaking - In the poetic forms section there are really difficult forms with tremendously difficult schematics - but this is why I love the CinqTroisDecaLa Rhyme the best... It gives you a lot to say (15 syllables each line) And the rhyme scheme is aa,bb,cc,a,b,c ----> relatively easy when you consider different sonnet forms and some of the old French forms :sweat:

Anyway - Ya did good! Very nice piece of writing

Jacquii.

PaintedDiary · #22 02-16-2007, 09:07 AM

Ms Nomad!!!! Beautiful!!!!!!!

Moonchild · #23 08-11-2007, 08:02 AM

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SWEET TOOTH ~ CINQ TROIS DECALA RHYME

You are like strawberry fruit minus seeds with sweetness supreme.
Over your voluptuous curves I pour chocolate and whip cream.
My delectable taste created my own pink flesh sundae.
Teasing me you look tempting to eat on a hot summer day.
From nothing to something you are juicy berries to my cream.
You’re the aftertaste of more that lasts after my pleasure scream.
I’ve a sweet tooth and I can’t resist your thick and fruity teem.
I dive into your creamy center with indulgent esteem.
When I’ve had my fill I lick my lips in satiated play
cause nothing is like the cool melt of your desires outward stream.

© August 11, 2007 Karen Davies

MsJacquiiC · #24 08-11-2007, 08:37 AM

WOW! What a most lovely picture
the cinq trois deca la rhyme is not bad either....
however you did miss the rhyme scheme of aabbcccabc
but wow - I'm hungry now

Jacquii.

Moonchild · #25 08-11-2007, 11:40 AM

Thank you Jacquii.
I'm glad you like.
I fixed it. Now what do you think?
I think it made it better.

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