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Spark Your Creativity #6 (CinqTroisDecaLa Rhyme Challenge)
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Old 01-02-2007, 08:40 PM
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Spark Your Creativity #6 (CinqTroisDecaLa Rhyme Challenge)

This poetic challenge features one of my favorite forms included in the Poetry-Defined section of JPiC... The CinqTroisDecaLa Rhyme will challenge your poetic expertise and flexibility, while enticing your poetic juices to flow.

This challenge will be used as a test-run for the Poetry-Defined website, as well as the Poetic Type Published section here on JPiC, and will culminate in a poll/vote of the favorite 2 pieces.


CHALLENGE DESCRIPTION:

Beneath is a beautiful photograph aptly entitled The Last One, which appears in the Poetry of the Visual section of JPS. Cordially provided by photographer Ian Williamson, The Last One appears with a thumbnail version --- just to whet your appetite of course.



Spoiler --->


CHALLENGE GOAL:
I mock my self; shedding sorrow laughs of hindsight
Courage sees naught the unshed tear that threatens my inside
(My insight a faith wallowing in prepaid pain)
Yet joy cometh in the mourning

The above 4-line piece is what I wrote to be featured alongside Ian's photograph collection.

The theme of that piece is "From Nothing To Something..." The challenge is to write a CinqTroisDecaLa rhyme featuring similar theme. Not only must you use this motif, you must also use The Last One photo as inspiration/motivation AND you must also include three of the following words and/or phrases within your poem:
  • strawberry fruit
  • seed
  • pink flesh
  • sweet
  • chocolate


Good luck! Have fun AND Happy Posting!

JPiC Moderating Team.


More information on the CinqTroisDecaLa Rhyme style may be found HERE
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Old 01-03-2007, 06:59 PM
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This is one heck of a Challenge MsJ & Alan! But I think I am up to it! It may not win any prizes, but I think it will get a few chuckles.


EAT ME

I was nothing when first you found me, all dirty in the field.
My sweet potential you saw at once and so to you I yield.
You took me home and cleaned me up, my red beauty you did see.
I can sense the wanton lust, the desire you have for me.
Though greatly tempted you hold back, knowing I'm not ready yet.
You gently lay me down, then rise, the chocolate sauce to get.
You spread my bottom with the sauce, making it gooey and wet.
You still do not taste my pink flesh, your willpower has been steeled.
Come, let my seed and juicy nectar flow out, unbound and free.
Strawberry fruit, a work of art once the chocolate has set.
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Old 01-07-2007, 06:51 AM
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Hey TREE - in the words of MS KIM = FANTABULOUS!
This is a sweet poem TREE - literally AND figuratively!
Very nice write!

Next...

Jacquii.
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Old 01-13-2007, 03:38 PM
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Dear Ms Tree,

This is indeed Fantabulous, (lol @ Ms Jacquii). Your such a talented JPiCan, can I take lessons? lol. Seriously, great write Ms Tree!!!

{~~**PD**~~}}

Last edited by PaintedDiary; 07-13-2008 at 08:26 PM.
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Old 01-13-2007, 08:10 PM
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TY Ladies! But where are YOUR entries to this?!!
LOL @ me. I did not realize until AFTER I had posted that I didn't have to use ALL of the words in the list! You might want to keep that in mind if you try this challenge. It sure is a stimulating one!
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Old 01-15-2007, 07:52 AM
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Okie Dokie MS TREE - but really I've kind resigned my self to being Webmistress lately, rather than Poet Webmistress LOL + I've been experiencing something so very dreadful lately = Writer's Block

Jacquii.
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Old 02-02-2007, 01:45 AM
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Hope and Chocolate

You planted a seed, I grew. Now I want to be free of you.
Our lives back then, they weren't so sweet, the guys, drugs; no food to eat.
I was scared. Just wanted to be held, but you were never there.
I'd close my eyes and hope to be far away from this dark place.
Yet each time I woke-was still here. Has God forgotten bout me?
Naw, I must have a purpose; what lies ahead out there for me?
I am not here to suffer, I am good, like Strawberry fruit.
I must go now, this seed has grown, this- No longer is my home.
I'm steppin out, trying something new and fresh, like Chocolate.
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Old 02-02-2007, 11:02 AM
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Hey V - I'm loving this poem - you've done well with the challenge words, but it's not quite a CinqTroisDecaLa Rhyme... The rhyme schematic for the style is aabbccabc - The syllable count of your lines (15) is correct though...

Anyway - back on topic ---- This piece is quite sweet - I'm loving the confidence - especially the very last line:

Quote:
I'm steppin out, trying something new and fresh, like Chocolate.
Allright - I hear ya - You go Girl
Very nice piece of poetry!

Jacquii.
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Old 02-02-2007, 11:08 AM
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I still find it weird when the words naw appear in apoem but this poem was super-original
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