more like on a rubbish roll...but this is a fun one!
If Ms. J wants to claim this one she can, since her muse took off so rudely!!

I'm mad at this write THERESE
You just showing out now j/k
Excellent stuff - I sure'd like to find my Muse lol

Jacquii.

Hey, Ms. J, when you have work like your super fab stuff, your muse deserves a vacation!!

Nomad

LOL - OK - This makes me feel better

Jacquii.

For Ms. J!

"Oh be quiet!" and "Quick! combine Alternative music
pure rubbish to MY ears! with rap...
compared to positive Christian Gospel
surely a resource to turn heathens from
getting their comeuppance and missing out on
the golden pear of peace from the Tree of Life!"

Nomad

OK - non-rehearsed AND off-top:


Drama-game Played


I wonder if Rumpelstiltskin ever combined
cocaine and wine whilst trickin' poor ole Girl.
"Rubbish," one may say, quietly quick: Divine.
Yet, I wonder if ever a resource he swirled:

Peace rather than gold. "It would'a been positively
fierce if he'd dropped the pear, the apple pie, the straw...
Smoked a rock, gotten high, and stood stolid
in his quietness." ---- Some poet on poor-man's block.

Had the Comeuppance King alternatively thought,
"Peace combined is not some rubbish, but alternative
resource for riches I will seek naught!" Pearing
positively into the future, "Comeuppance quick and quiet..."

And of course
no tawdry drama-game played
with my 1st-born.

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Well I did do about 15 minutes of researching Rumpelstiltskin on wikipedia... Interesting article that refreshed my memory: Rumpelstiltskin - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Tehehehe - My poem - a tiny bit of CRAZYness ((imagine that)) --- 2 questions --- In this poem am I for or against Rumplestiltskin? AND --- In this poem am I for or against the "Comeuppance" King?

ALSO with my 3:00 AM silliness - thought to use the words 2 times

hmm - don't know how I missed this post...
Anyway - interesting write indeed MS N - Are you telling me that I'm some kind of deity or something LOL

Good one though - So anyone gonna comment on mine
I found my Muse for about 45 minutes or so....

Lost my glass slipper
for quick I had to run,
to board before the Chariot
turn to pumpkin and mice
spell was done

How could I imagine myself
wrapped in such precious arms
of a man, my evil step-sisters'
tried to win, while longing
for his quiet yet unbeknownst charms

My Fairy Godmother said, "Rubbish!"
to those of wicked woes
no alternative at midnight
yet I reminisce of my Prince
and beautiful glass slippers on my toes

How dare they; how could they
treat me so torturous and cruel
peace and love is all I long for
I combine revenge with resources
till I concoct one of their own witch's brew

Bug eyes, prickly pear
add scorpions and snails
a dash of their perfume
pinch of snake spice and
a cup of cat-o-nine tails

Positively would bring me joy
to witness the evil one's wince
to serve them this grand lunch
as I pray the matching slipper finds me
as I silently beckon my handsome Prince

Please enjoy the meal, courtesy from me to you
as I dream of a life with my Prince
alas evil step-mother and sisters to
for one by one will certainly die
in the name of Cinderella comeuppance.

Dear Jacquii,

Comment ? Comment ? OK - BRILLIANT !

Tho there is one tiny quibble - the 2nd use of "pear" was "pearing" when I think you mean peEring - as in looking ?

Actually a hugely fun poem with quite a serious bent.

I say again -these 10 word challenges can take so many people in so many different directions, indeed, even a single person (you know who you are ! ) in so many directions, that I will be posting these here frequently !

ALL of you, very well done.

Love
Alan

Yes, this is Brilliant Ms Jacquii-----> I also would say you are FOR Rump and NOT for the King.

{{{{{~~~~***KIM***~~~}}}}}


P.S. Funny, we both thought of Childhood stories, as mine is about Cinderella, posted above.