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LOL @ MsJ! You have no idea how hard I wracked my poor brain for that rhyme!
You and Alan are doing a marvelous job with these challenges - I love them!
I quickly grabbed the pear off the cart
from the old man's stand on 125th street.
He sold fruits, drinks and all kinds of rubbish,
but I still stopped there every day. Quiet as kept, I preferred his spot,
an alternative resource to the places uptown,
over priced and "uppities" looking down at me.
This old man was honest; doing a positive thing and combined with hard work, was allowed to remain in peace.
So while disarrayed at times, I'll spend my change here, rather than there.
How's that for comeuppance?
Excellent - tho you might want to make a double RR in disarrayed.
You not only use the words well, but also weave a magic which makes me SEE the old fruit cart, but also chuck in a piece of humanity and philosophy as well. Awedome.
Another one which confirms my love of 10-word challenges !
Alan- also my spell checker ( I actually thought about that and 4got 2 go back, good lookin out). I am enjoying these, but U can't tell.Lol....................