OK gang, Please "Critique" I really like this site. Good Job to all that run it. Job well done. I've only been writing a little over a year. I'm not good with grammar at all, but a lot of people want me to consolidate all my poems into a book.
I feel they are not good enough so I will probably do one just for the family, I'm not looking to get published. But I feel this would be a GREAT! place for some honest "Critique". So dig away!. Please. I want to better myself and you will not hurt any feeling on this end.
Love all of you!
Art
“Beauty Is In The Eyes Of The Beholder”
Bonded and stitched
To all four corners of the globe
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Cracks
The sun seeps through
Inhibits warmth
For the evil of your soul
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Backlit colors
Excel through every rose
The ground you walk on
Shakes
With a tremor
Cultivating the earths
Core
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What’s been dormant to break?
Has reawaken
To reality
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The ancient times
Has come to live
With
The present times
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The dawn of iniquity
Does not unite
With the console of your
character
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Beauty is amongst all living possessions
What is it the mind sees?
That captivates the human soul
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If you went to heaven
Would you still be here?
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Were only a crown
Inch away
Knowing what truth is
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Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder
The windows to our souls
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Looking into your eyes
I see what truth is
Blanketing the sin of your soul
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My thoughts are a reflection
Of
What’s around me
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You heart
Is the key
To my
Soul
Arthur Henn