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The Critique Saloon This is the place to post poems that you'd like to better by getting suggestions & constructive criticism. **NOTE** For formal critique only!
this is an old poem i would like to improve to publication standard.

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Gail: I think Thea is concerned that if it's worked by everybody then it'll be out of her hands and she won't be able to call it her own. I can understand that, but maybe we should just do a different poem, then it won't be hers in the first place so she won't feel like that. It'll be everybody's?
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that sounds interesting but not for me. thanks anway
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i didn't see your post above my last one libralight. idk if someone else tried that than i would contribute but not with my own poetry you are very right if this workshop does happen how would i find it so i may put in my two cents?
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