Originally Posted by shayshay741

I must submit this in [along with 7 other poems... yeow] for a minor school project. Im not satisfied, and would love a little bit [or a lot] of help. Thank you!

Fly to me [or maybe Leap of Faith??]

If you are just willing to spread your wings Take the word (just) out
You can soar to me, I will teach you how to fly.
All you have to do is believe in everything
You have wanted us to become, and why.

Simply feel the light wind ruffle your new found feathers
Step up and curl your toes right over the edge.
In the distance you can see what you have wanted forever change to (forever wanted)
Take a silent breath, make a silent pledge

Promise to your self never to look back, and believe! change to (Promise you'll never)
Bend your knees deep, swing your arms fast make it (real fast)
Take a leap of faith; soar straight into my arms, into your dreams. take out ( add (and) between faith and soar
Your worries are gone; together we can start a new life unlike your past