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The Critique Saloon This is the place to post poems that you'd like to better by getting suggestions & constructive criticism. **NOTE** For formal critique only!

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Alan! Just reading your suggestions was a lot of fun - caps are automatic in Word, and I must say I didn't bother to change them as I often do nowadays..
I'm stuck in the rut with my "bent on rhyming" writing!!! ha ha! I seriously will try to edit out some of the remaining "ings" if I can.

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Precious time ? Only when YOU find what I offer useful, so thanks !

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