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Old 03-02-2007, 03:54 AM
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Hello Ace, I suffer from severe Panic Disorder, and as you stated the breathing is VERY
important in writing about this Disease...If you could put it in to a different form, it would
be more eye catching...Other than that, stick to your own words, as they are your words and no one else...Got ta go having a panic attack...hehe...Hugs, Twinks
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Well all the ways I talked about the breathing were different but I guess I could take into thought the whole different form thing....oh and I posted the final copy in the misc. thread...



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This is your chose King Ace and may your writings fly and touch the hearts of your many fans. Trying different forms and landing on one or several is a good way to express different thoughts, senses and feelings, making it easier for your fans to read and drool over. I will read and comment on your finished poem...Hugs, Twinks
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