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Release My Horrid Soul

Won't you please snuff out my existence? Set me free!
Find my resting place! Destroy it for me!
I'm tired of having this unquenchable thirst for blood, see
So be my knight in shining armor! Please release me!

I'm tired of the darkness and the way I have to live
Never to feel the sun shine on my face, having to quench my thirst with the blood of others
I have given everything within my being I can give
Destroy me! I want to join those that have already passed and are at peace. I want to be able to refer to them as my brothers.

I no longer wish to participate in this horrid morbid life style
So bring the wooden stake and a big knife so you may decapitate me
I have been in this existence too long, a mighty long while
I want to die! Save my soul! Set me free!

Release me from this hell on earth I must partake in
Hundreds of years I have lived this sheer hell
Drinking the blood of others I must kill! This alone is an utmost sin
I can remember every victim. Every little horrible detail!

Purify my grave with fire! Release me and set me free!
I can't wait for the peace I shall obtain after I step over to the other side
I'm sure I shall be forgiven as what I did was under the influence of a demon, see
Help me release my soul so it can find the ocean of goodness and wash up on the shore of the other side in it's tide.
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