FTD4KiNG

The sea,
In all its vastness,
Ripples about & splashes,
Crashes, hence wading enviously,
Released in repetitions of roar,
Dark and still as black cherry Jell-O molding,
Wise ancient depth of mystery sedates me.

The sea,
With beams of light formed stanchions,
Durable upon the motionless body of said vastness reflecting,
Submerged activities of dark fables glowed amongst,
Such a mirage as dense deserves a walk,
Active up close thus energy surged,
Wondrous vision sedates my heart& nerves.

The sea,
Appearing peaceful and quaint,
Invitations to take my breath away,
Liquid mass of enormous capacity,
So heavy whilst embedded,
Under sparkling diamond sheets,
Cold & salty hugs soothe coarsely,
Surround my sunken person.

The sea,
Posing with hunters antic's,
Short winded as a camera man's tantrum,
Regretful of said parting gift,
Trickle down & gleaming brightly fading from my sight,
Flowed imaginable depths, overjoyed,
Everlasting vastness you've held rank reminiscent of images left.

The sea,
Keeper of tragedy,
Density of murkiness surrounding my person,
Tides of low & high working at all times,
Equal thoughts of the masses,
If said drops could multiply,
Intrigue notions to take my breath away.

Re. G

erikestabrook

splendid poem King,
smooth flowing and mystical,
very good

Altree94

An excellent poem! One that is well worth some minor editing.
I have only two suggestions for improving this work. One is to replace the word "said" (which has been over-used) with a descriptive word and the other is to write out the word "and" instead of using "&".
Very well done, Mr.K!

-Tree