Libertine

really good write, i myself am not too concerned about the cliffhanger ending, it leaves a lot to the readers interpretation and i urge you not to post an answer to the question left at the end! i think it is the very nature of poetry that one day it may mean one thing to the reader, the next something completely different, all depending on frame of mind and the mood that they are in. i liked this a lot, especially the strong title and subsequent theme of 'she sees white horses'
Matt x

Synchro

I think the piece would gain considerably by avoidance of repetition of the title. I am new here, so I havn't been able to read the other critiques, but as I become more fully aware of the procedure, I'll certainly take that into consideration. Happy to be here.