KayaOtah

I got the idea from MsJacquii, Erm, since my works are corrected so perfectly here, I hope to gain better poem as I was thinking to give this poem for my teachers in my primary school, OEPS. I really enjoyed them as they are all kind, helpful, experienced, entertaining and responsible. They are fair too, they treat all equally. I know it's kindda early, that's because I can have more time to perfect it.

Teachers, are like candles...
Every inch they consume...
Are stars for students...
Cheerful and kind...
Helpful and fine...
Extra-ordinarily...
Ready to...
Shine...

Hard works paid off here I say...
Everything we have is from you...
Loving teacher yes you are...
Please forgive us when we made you sad...

Students, are cocoons...
Turning to butterflies...
Under care of teachers...
Dumb turns smart...
Enriching the knowledge...
Never too early...
Time flies my friend, obey your teachers...
Salute them...

Growth of us...
Ripening of our mind...
Opening to the reality world is...
What teachers always do for us...

Treating us like we’re your children...
Having to scold us when you don’t like to...
And again we disobeyed you times and times...
Never giving up on us...
Kites flew high in the end...

You are the source of my inspiration...
One day, I wanna be just like you...
Understanding and a great teacher...

Done by : Kyanta, ex-OE student
Help by : JPiC Forum For Writers
Starting Idea from : MsJacquii

Sally Roberts

Dear Kyanta:

Your acrostic poem is superb!!! I enjoyed re-reading it over and over.
I wish I would have the same kind of kindness in my teachers you have in yours.
When I was in school (which was so very very long ago) my teachers were very discouraging. My english teachers always told me I would never be a good writer, and discouraged and put down everything I tryed to write.
I could never become better I was placed in the back of the room and always felt unwanted.
When I was in High School I quit public school and received my diploma through home schooling (with honors) then went on to become a published writer.

So CONGRATULATIONS and HATS OFF to all your teachers who encourage you in everyway.
Thank you for the splendid poems, at your age I comment you whole heartedly!!!!!!!!!!
Keep up the great work!! and stay in school
Blessings

Altree94

This is a truly awesome acrostic, Kyanta!
The only suggestion that I can offer would be to have it read downward as:
Teachers help students grow. Thank you.
The way it is now - Teacher help student grow. Thank you.
- the syntax is slightly off.

I am sure that your teacher will be very proud to receive this!

- Tree.

KayaOtah

Thanks Altree94, wrote a reply on your acrostic. What is syntax?
I'll work on the two 'S'.

Thank you Ms Sally too once again.