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The Critique Saloon This is the place to post poems that you'd like to better by getting suggestions & constructive criticism. **NOTE** For formal critique only!
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but i am curious as to what critique i will get.

Do you know what i love about you best?
The savory sensation of your silk brushing my breast
The hot pull of your mouth as we delve in to sin
Your velvet core brushing my thigh and skin
The night of your locks cacooning my face
Your scent, your smell, your taste



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