petehall

All comments and suggestions would be appreciated

What do you want me to do
and what do you want me to say
why are you even here
here to ruin my day

your a bad smell that wont go away
A stain thats her to stay
You dont go away
You dont go away

What do I have to do
To get you out of my head
What is it you want me to do
Does one of us have to be dead

Youre a black mark next to my name
How could you think were th same
You dont go away
You dont go away

To be in the same room as you
It pains me deep in my heart
I dont care what happens to you
As long as it means you depart

Your a time Id rather forget
Youre nothin but a goddamn regret
You dont go away
You dont go away

butchiesmom

I've made changes in your poem below, mostly spelling and punctuation. I've deleted some unneccesary words and some other corrections.

Certainly and interesting poem. I hope you and this person have reconciled or this person is out of your life. The anger you feel fairly radiates at the reader!

hugs,
Gail
What do you want me to do
What do you want me to say
Why are you here
Here to ruin my day

You're a bad smell that won't go away
A stain that's here to stay
You don't go away
You don't go away

What do I have to do
To get you out of my head
What is it you want me to do
Does one of us have to be dead

You're a black mark next to my name
How could you think we're the same
You don't go away
You don't go away

To be in the same room with you
Pains me deep in my heart
I don't care what happens to you
As long as it means you depart

You're a time I'd rather forget
You're nothin but a regret (deleted goddam)
You don't go away
You don't go away