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Altogether different song about somone i like but comitting is hard

You're coming on strong
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Old 08-17-2007, 04:40 PM
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You're coming on strong

just like a summer morning

Youre coming on strong

You happen with out good warning

It doesn't take long

I admit I kinda like ya

you seem like lots of fun

but when you said I love ya

well ya coming on strong


You're like the cold in winter

you're makin me run

But like a storm you hit me

and then I'm done

I think your kind of nice yeah

and you know how to get your kicks

But I have to pay the price yeah

Cos you come on strong



You put me at ease to quickly

Then you come on strong

I just dont know why you picked me

But I wanna be gone

I know that wed be perfect

and i know that we'd get along

I know we'd be so happy

but your coming on to strong

I said your coming on to strong
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i would start this one with a beat up six string with nylon guitars. the music is cake for a song like this. It's fun and makes you smile.

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