stardust

"ANGEL OF PEACE." by Cyndi Aka Spiritisup. (2003).

My Comments: I like this Verse Form very much. It has got a very good rhyme style form: 3 quartets stanzas and ABAB rhyme applications.
I wish, I could write a Poem like this one. It is so simple, but very good indeed. Here, they are its words:

Come with me, let´s all take flight,
Like the golden Angel of Peace and Light.
Spreading love by day and night,
Throughout the world with all our might.

Take your friend and hold their hand
And then the next, let´s form a Band.
A Band so Strong, it can´t be broken.
It´s BOND of HOPE and FAITH outspoken.

In Prayer and thought with all our heart,
That all the world will be a part
Of Divine love shared as one,
As the Heavens cheer..."A Job Well Done!!"

Author: Cyndi Aka Spiritisup. (2003).

Altree94

Hey Starry!
Although the words and the message are beautiful, the rhyme scheme is not consitent. The first quatrain is a,a,a,a and the second and third quatrains are a,a,b,b. None are a,b,a,b and it does not seem to have any set syllable count either, which throws the rhythm off in spots. It does however, have perfect rhymes.

stardust

Hello my dear friend, Ms. Tree: Good Morning, dear!! OH!! Thank you for replying to me!! YES!! Your are right!! The Poet wrote the first 2 Stanzas with Rhyme AAAA, and the last 2 Stanzas with Rhyme AABB. I was wrong. I am so sorry!! I must learn a lot, before I could begin to write good Poetry myself. Thank you for your moral support and words of encouragement, dear Tree!! You are a special nice Internet friend of mine, sweetheart!! God bless you, dear!! Warmest Regards. Sincerely, Starry.