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Old 02-23-2007, 03:43 AM
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And we are left alone in this trance
The un-practical romance

Cut off from all that's real
we've learned how to conceal

That which makes us who we are
In exchange for another scar

And what of all that we cherish?

They'll all perish.

Under this reign of pain




i dunno, just felt like posting it..because, it was for me..i dunno. I thought it was good.

what do you think it means?...or..what does it make you feel?



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Old 02-25-2007, 03:27 AM
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And we are left alone in this trance
The un-practical romance

Cut off from all that's real
we've learned how to conceal

That which makes us who we are
In exchange for another scar

And what of all that we cherish?

They'll all perish.

Under this reign of pain
Very nice writing from your friend MS MANGO - send an invite to JPiC if you like...

Anyway - this is some really nice piece of writing... Such "unpractical romance"? MsJacquiiC knows ALLLLL about that lol. But one thing is that in the concealing you tend to loose a bit of yourself - That's why I'm scarless... Tired of concealing. Perhaps also that's why I tend to be a bit lonely.... In the courage - I've found cowards with tougher tricks up their sleeves.

And still I say "Yep! They'll perish! Caught up in the game of karma..."

Being caught up in the reign of pain is why I'm not really smiling at this poem, but rather nodding my head in a horribly acquiescense of knowing.

Very interesting poem.
Thanx MANGO for sharing it with us - And thank your friend for writing.
Very poignant piece with tough truth as the testimony.

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Old 02-25-2007, 03:31 AM
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thanks!
I'll try to invite him again..
i tried once, but he couldn't figure anything out...
for someone so smart, he can be stupid :]

what link should I give him that directs you directly to making an account?



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Old 02-25-2007, 05:01 AM
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O! The registrations link = JPiC Forum For Writers - Forum Rules
And if he needs help with navigating the forum and whatever - We've set up a forum JPiC Video Tutorials - So far we only have 2 tutorials, but should be a good start towards helping him get started!

Thanx again for sharing his poem with us! Really nice.

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Old 02-27-2007, 01:47 AM
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haha...he's decided to become a sort of an Emily Dickenson...of course he doesn't think he'll ever be as good as her, but he's decided to be a closet poet :]



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haha...he's decided to become a sort of an Emily Dickenson...of course he doesn't think he'll ever be as good as her, but he's decided to be a closet poet :]
Emily Dickenson eh? One of my favorite poets actually - Her stuff is so dark, yet insightful.
ALSO - I've finally got around to putting the Invite System up again. JPiC Gets An Invite System

You'll be happy about that MS MANGO
AND thanx referral!

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Haha...Emily Dickinson is his fav. poet :]

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