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Emotional Romantic In love or have poetry that tugs at ones heartstrings? Please share your romantic tear-jerkers & emotionally draining pieces right here in this forum.

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Old 04-20-2007, 02:55 PM
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Eyes closed
heart pounding
temples throbbing
tossing
dreaming, awake
I tumble down
to my open window
look out at the night sky
the stars, flashing
I drift out amongst them
a dying light
straining to be seen
struggling to breathe
buried by this fog
this sickening sensation
this myopic vision
I can't see
I can't think
I can't sleep.

succumbing
to these odd days
i've slipped
into my past
into that man
into what I left behind
sorrowful, saddened
scars bright
pink light
misplaced
dispersed
misused
so sad
so confused
so tired of sleeping
and dying for something else,
for something real...

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Old 04-20-2007, 08:19 PM
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Some stylin going on here, Hugh! See, it's not just me...I like both the cadence of the words and the emotions behind them...they really pull the reader into the frustration. lol! been there...done that...but mine is usually around 2:15AM.

Love this piece!

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HUGH - this is a bit different from the style I'm used to seeing from you. This is more of a rapid fire approach; a staccato of sorts with the use of one- & two-word lines. This poem to me speaks of not MISplacement but DISplacement

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so tired of sleeping
and dying for something else,
for something real...
Seems a sad song that's being played HUGH - what it do?
Interesting share from you. What inspires this write?

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