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Emotional Romantic In love or have poetry that tugs at ones heartstrings? Please share your romantic tear-jerkers & emotionally draining pieces right here in this forum.

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Old 10-31-2007, 06:43 PM
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Sensuous fingers
begin to dance
heated little breaths
erupt into pants
whispered across
a slumbering ear
as a warm nubile body
draws itself near

frissons of ardor
arc flesh to flesh
Male eyes watch as
desires begin to mesh
Womanly vision darts
side to side reading
under closed eyes
erotic dreams seeding

moist lips trail kisses
all over honeyed skin
as the man impatiently waits
for responses from within
he becomes slightly
more demanding
needing entry into her
dreams not withstanding

eyelids flutter open
focus first far then near
arms reach out to pull him close
and words whisper
"I was just dreaming about you dear"

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Old 10-31-2007, 09:53 PM
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Now THAT'S erotic! .... woooooo weeeeee!



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Old 11-01-2007, 02:20 AM
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Dear Mysty,

I LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!! First was that title....and did not know what words I was going to read and where you were gonna take me. I could NOT take my eyes off the screen...so sensually, tastefully, and done so poetically subtle that it just melts the mind. Your creative and unique style lets us take "your" words and our "imagination" where "we" wanted and how far we want to take the visual. Additionally, the images painted were oh so vibrant in all its brevity. The end was very very nice, that left me smiling and poetically satisfied. AWESOME write dahling!!!! Excellent rating.

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Mysty,
This is very sweet. Irotic in a sense, but that's not exactly the message I'm getting here - it's more of love and yerning - desire and fulfillment.



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Dear Kim.......... Thank you for a stunning review....... You always give the best ones. *hugs* Love Ya.

Dear Jolie...... you got it right too but this time from the gentleman's perspective hmm?
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this poem is hot. poetic and sensual at the same time.

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Oh My! Yes - sensuous and scintillatingly so:

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under closed eyes
erotic dreams seeding...

...dreams not withstanding...

"I was just dreaming about you dear"
--- This is a sweet poem actually - just highlighting an adult fantasy - scribed to perfection IMO - Makes me want to go to sleep and dream a sweet sweet dream