Emotional RomanticIn love or have poetry that tugs at ones heartstrings? Please share your romantic tear-jerkers & emotionally draining pieces right here in this forum.
The Affair or........... dam girl you look good
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You were looking just like
a flower with incredible
Power
like the vines of trees
you really make me weak in
the knee as are hearts intertwined
I'm thinking that as I look into your eye's
that we both soon cry
you were looking just like
a flower with incredible
Power
like the vine's of tree's
you really make me weak in both
knee's...... so baby baby please
as are hearts intertwined
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Michael,
This is so unique, as I have stated before, you have such a one-of-a kind style. Seems like your pieces should be set to some smooth jazz, and spoken, read out loud. Have you considered that? Are you speaking of a certain someone in this piece? As I feel the depth, is heartfelt, and very touching. With each poem I read of yours michael, I think a master poet is slowly unfolding, piece by piece. There is also the uniquness of the length of your poems, are straight to the point. Therefore, you have woven the most colorful words into your quilt. Secondly, there is a humbling feel, to your poetry, fresh, clean, and innocent, very humbling. I absolutely LOVE THIS!!!!! BRAVO POET!!! BRAVO!!!
You really startin to swell my head up
As I've said your support means so much
thanks for taking the time to read this
yea I felt that maybe it would be cool to have an affair
but I know It's NOT.......but this was a long time ago
anyway I love the romantic pieces.......and wanted to try one
this is a work in progress maybe I'll make revisions
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OK - big ups to Flower Power LOL -----> All about the love yeah!
Loved the originality of this flow MICHAEL - very nice rhythm too - seems you had a lot of fun creating this one! so to you my dear:
Very nice poem, michael! I really enjoyed it. Sure wish my husband could/would write stuff like this for me! I have to agree with kim - the flow is so smooth, it really does call for some music to go with it! Write on!
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Very RnB and jazz kinda treatment ..could be set to some fine music ..very very unique and the kinda poetry that adds to the diversity on jpic .. glad I met yu in the chatbox today ..Im allready a fan ... yu gonna get the lady's out here weak in the knees 4 sure ... lookout for Ms J , Nomad and PD .. Uve got a female fan following allready .. good work bro
Chester
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