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Emotional Romantic In love or have poetry that tugs at ones heartstrings? Please share your romantic tear-jerkers & emotionally draining pieces right here in this forum.
tribute to my goddess

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Old 03-28-2007, 12:04 PM
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lovely angel....
whisp of the air and the night
your ties are not to be broken....
your ties bind my heart tonight
all of your beauty in everything...
from your red locks...
to your emotive style....
you where and still are...
everything my heart sought or desired....
i could attempt to convey...
to tell of what life you portrayed....
but for the first time, my words are gone....
empty mouth, empty tongue.....
i have no description of what you have done...
to me, my heart, my soul...
all that mattered....
all bottled up in the bombshell of my love....
you
alexis..
a tribute to the goddess.....
a replica of all that is assured...
all that is blessed....
in your fragile state, you have all the gifts this world seeks...
so when the thought that you never knew....
the thought that you never seen....
just what magesty you hold....
just what life you lived...
breaks my heart and crushes me.
love do follow my soul...
watch over my heart
be the keeper of my mind....
i will never give up on you....
i will find....
a way to reach you, see you, and be riden of these blind eyes....
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Old 03-30-2007, 04:58 PM
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Phillip, this is a passionate piece...very tender... and I love the imagery you invoke with the wording. Beautiful!!

p.s. I see I have a "soul mate" in the use of the .....

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ah nomad.. you made me laugh... yes this write was very personal....
having just been through a straneous recovery from hearing about the suicide of a former girlfriend... i wrote this in memory of her... turns out she was alive all along....



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