michael

Ask Your Doctor or is dat particular heartache medicine" right for me"


If the pain I felt when you left
will persist is hit or miss ing you part of me
is gone
winter was so long when you left

It was good to have no more lies which I despised
layer's so yesterday's love
like when we were at the beach and i preached
If my pen used all of the ink of an ocean it would say
yo you beautiful to the tenth power

And ask your doctor if the pain I feel is real like
when I used to read about the slave trade
and you would be amazed and so ask your doctor
if this heartache medicine is right for me

Ask your doctor what should I say if ever we meet
and should I be discrete?

Ask your doctor if the pain I felt when you left
will persist is hit or miss

Ask him if what i feel is really real

Ask him for the remedy for me

KingAce

I really like this it is so easy to relate to in the sense that everyone wants a cure for heartbreak or a medicine for heartache....I like how this was out and formed, even though it was a sad feel poem this part made me smile

If my pen used all of the ink of an ocean it would say
yo you beautiful to the tenth power

I like that, itz got a nice ring to it...I enjoyed this one a lot because it makes you reflect on past relationships and questions you had that brings forth a lot of "what ifs" to the mind and makes you consider what you woul say or do if you saw that person after the heartbreak...cause I know a lot of people couldn't bring themselves to say anything or aven look or think about that person....I like this one a lot;Thank you

Altree94

What an excellent idea! A remedy for heartache - if anyone invents one, they'll be a billionair overnight! Too bad that the only remedy right now is time - something in very short supply! It is a sad poem but it still has hope because you are questioning if the pain is going to persist. It feels like it will but there is hope that it won't. I really enjoyed this poem, michael! Thank-you for posting it!

PaintedDiary

Dear michael,

I am in awe of this poem. Yes, one can actually feel your heartache, but there is hope in the fact that your heart is big enough to hold new memoreies while archiving the past painful ones. Your style is a style to behold, as I have said in the past. To think that we could not share in your evolution as a poet is unheard of. Your style, technique, and powerful pack of words are amazing michael. I am so pleased that you share your talent with us here at this Forum. I have no doubt that the doctor you refer to is yourself, and you know what is best for your heart. Small doses of love can come from unknown places if you are open to recognize them. Some revealed, some not. In the end, God fills our hearts with the right medicine. Great Poem!!!! Take Care.

Kimberly

Sebby

I love this poem, if only heartache was cured as easily as a headache the world could be a much happier place.
Nice poem

michael

King Ace: Thanks so much for taking the time to comment I was Inspired to write this one by my ex-girlfriend lol. But really I'm glad that you found something you could relate to here. Also I wanted to do a piece with the phrase "Ask Your Doctor" I think that we should ask ourselves and not our doctor's. Anyway thanks again. take care.
Tree: Thank you so much. And I am glad that you liked this one. And yeah that would be great to have a remedy for heartache. I like the way you break in down. I really appreciate you taking the time to comment. Also congratulations on being member of the moment you really got it goin on.
Kim:What's up...My last heartache was rough because I told myself that if my girlfriend at the time wanted out of the relationship or if I decided that I wanted out no big deal. But after three years it was a big deal. And I have nothing against going to see a doctor...but alot of what I see seems to be profit motivated and not really helping people heal-themselves. And I'm just really so grateful and excited. That you and other's might read or comment and say HEY you might have something their. My style comes from other poets that I have enjoyed reading. A lot of the old-school one's.
anyway thanks again. TTYL
Sebby: Hi ......long time no see. Thanks so much for your comments. I'm glad that you liked this. Good to see you here again. And again how is the weather over their? Take care. Thanks again.