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Emotional Romantic In love or have poetry that tugs at ones heartstrings? Please share your romantic tear-jerkers & emotionally draining pieces right here in this forum.

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Old 10-05-2007, 01:18 AM
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Autumn Love
Autumn’s Love
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As the day slowly meanders to twilight
Hearts become entangled in song and play
And autumn’s mist a majestic enticement
Of passions blooming in the bright sunlight.
~
In the crisp morning breeze, dew bathes the leaves
Of golds, reds, orange and yellows a delight to the eyes
Nothing can compare to making love
In an invigorating Autumn breeze.
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The setting sun stimulates the calm waters
As sensual breathing calms,
The climatic motion and soothing sounds.
Slip away my love, into the dusk
leaving a sweet scented trail
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Very sweetly romantic, Bear. One thing is a little confusing...you start out talking about the day meandering to twilight then go on to passions blooming in bright sunlight...I'm not sure if you meant "meander to daylight, maybe?"

Apart that this is beautifully written and as usual your imagery is truly wonderful.

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Vivid description! Enchanting meaning
Very nice ^^
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Nomad just before the sun finaaly set there is a bright daylight left then it gets dark thats what I meant and thank you so much for your magnificent comments I appreciate them so very much
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Just what I would expect from you

Ahhhh My favorite time of the year "Autumn" I always look forward to all the different sights and smells in the Autumn season. Since I live in the country woods all the trees are so colorful.

And as usual you have captured the essence of Autumn and love all rolled up into one.
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