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Because of You
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Each day I wake and see you there,
I watch you breathe and stroke your hair.
You rustle oh so peacefully,
for somehow you can sense it's me.
Slip out of bed, and have my cup,
of coffee trying to wake up.
Down to the den to my old chair,
and ponder while I'm sitting there.
Why has my life so changed with you?
My every hope and dream come true.
Simple fate or just pure chance?
I don't believe in happenstance.
A greater power, much stronger than,
any power known to man.
Has brought me you, down from the sky,
and to this day I don't know why.
But "Because of You" I feel complete,
a happiness I can't retreat.
You've brought new meaning to my life,
I thank the Lord for you my Wife.
You make me proud, by compliment,
my smallest task or non-event.
A man should feel this way I sense,
yet so few do in self defense.
Much wasted time has passed before,
in days an empty pointless score.
But "Because of You" and all you give,
I now have purpose, Now I live.
My vow to you Princess Delight,
to love your soul each day and night.
Not take for granted your gift of love,
forsake reward from God above.
Forever thankful through and through,
a blessed man, "Because of You"
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Originally Posted by Juzjon
But "Because of You" I feel complete,
a happiness I can't retreat.
You've brought new meaning to my life,
I thank the Lord for you my Wife.
My vow to you Princess Delight,
to love your soul each day and night.
Not take for granted your gift of love,
forsake reward from God above.
Forever thankful through and through,
a blessed man, "Because of You"
Dear John ,
This was so beautiful, warming, and heartfelt from beginning to end. To scribe such a blessed tribute to your Wife, was simply beautiful. The power in the simplicity of your rhyme was executed masterfully. I loved every inch of this poem. Tells us you have a beautiful heart and soul. Loved It!!! I look forward to reading more of your work.
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PAINTED, What a sweet compliment on my poem. Ya' know what? Inspriation comes from the heart and soul. If that can be put to words, then a magical pen of life takes place. I will post "Field of Dreams" here for you, let me know what you think.
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Your poem is quite lovely the iambic meter is really refreshing and the rhyme is unforced which really reinforces the entire meaning of your poem. It's a soft and melodic flow you have going on...
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But "Because of You" I feel complete,
a happiness I can't retreat.
You've brought new meaning to my life,
I thank the Lord for you my Wife.
A beautiful and heartfelt tribute/ode to love.
Thanx for the sharing AND again = Welcome!
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Juzjon:
SUPERB!!!!!
Excellent rating I add today
A perfect poem in everyway.
There's nothing left for me to say.
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The ladies have all melted with this write, but the men too are appreciative of this heartfelt poem. Really enjoyed it, I think that's how a man should feel towards his wife thanks for documenting it for us. Much love, and greater things to come I presume... bye for now
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I look forward to reading more of your work.
