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Your lips have graced mine luxuriate visits many,
Your hands stroking my flesh with an artful beauty,
Your eyes have held mine in passionate reflections,
And your love has given me my fiery direction.
Every embrace frees the breath from my chest,
Eversy sigh releasing love to erase the bereft.
You have halted my tears and soothed my sorrow’s;
Made sensual love to me from night ‘till ‘morrow…
Your handsome face creates memories picturesque;
To hold my lips to yours shows how deeply I am blessed.

-2007

butchiesmom

Vivid images! Great poem! I found myself slowing down to read it, something in itself, actually, so that's good. Makes me think then.
I like the 2nd line: ...Your hands stroking my flesh with an artful beauty,...

Though it has a fantastic flow, smooth and luxurious, the first line seems a bit jerky. The rest of the poem is like my favorite pie, french silk! Oh, so good!

I've made a few suggestions, only to correct mistakes. They are in bold.
Every sigh releasing love to erase the bereft.
You have halted my tears and soothed my sorrows;

Fantastic job! Can't wait to read more of your writing!
hugs,
Gail

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thank you for your feedback yes i have quite a few typo's. and maybe i'll go look back at the second line. i'll look around for your work once i'm more in tune with this site.