Register Main Forum Shop JPiC Donate

Go Back   JPiC Portal ⇒ Main Forum ⇒ Poetic Colours ⇒ Emotional Romantic
A Breaking Heart

 
Posting Policy | JPiC Terms Of Service | Site Map | Need Help? | Lost Your Password? | JPiC Moderating Team

Emotional Romantic In love or have poetry that tugs at ones heartstrings? Please share your romantic tear-jerkers & emotionally draining pieces right here in this forum.
A Breaking Heart
this thread has 10 replies and has been viewed 211 times


Post New Thread Reply
Page 1 of 2 1 2 >
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
  post #1     Quote this post in a PM
Old 05-01-2008, 11:43 AM
Member Information
Real Name: racheul
Age: Private Capricorn 2 Country:
angelic mamma
crazymamma5 Surfs The Web With:
My Mood:
 
Join Date: Jan 13 2008
Last Online: 07-03-2008 10:21 AM
Location: Mcintyre,Pa
Posts: 78 Threads: 8
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
Instant Messaging Info Is Private
A Breaking Heart
A Breaking Heart

My heart is breaking
for I am losing
a brother,
a son,
a father,
an uncle.

My heart is breaking
for my husband
is my rock
a strong shoulder
to cry on
for those comforting words.

My heart is breaking
for I don't know
how to comfort
my parents
myself
or my kids.

My heart is broken.


crazymamma5's Signature


Life's a bitch then you die!!!!




RACHEUL

Add Post to del.icio.usFurl this Post!Reddit!Submit This Post To Netscape!Submit This Post To Newsvine!Share Post on Facebook
Reply With Quote

JPiC Forum Sponsor Links
JPiC Forum Sponsors
This site is enhanced with Google Links 		 
JPiC Whole-Post Ad Policy

Whole-Post advertisings are shown
only to Guests of the Forum. Once
successfully registered, such ads
will not be shown. Register your
FREE account today and become
a Member of our Community!
Standard Sponsored Links

  post #2     Quote this post in a PM
Old 05-01-2008, 11:48 AM
 
Member Information
Real Name: Gail
Age: Private Scorpio 2 Country:
Member Blog Entries: 5
Moderator
butchiesmom Surfs The Web With:
My Mood:
 
Join Date: Oct 20 2006
Last Online: Today 02:47 AM
Location: In a trailer, on a hill.
Posts: 635 Threads: 56
Thanks: 8
Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts
Instant Messaging Info Is Private
Awards Showcase
Contributor Award Titanium Friend Award 
Total Awards: 2
Rating: Not Rated
Ok, you've brought more than one tear to my eyes. So beautiful, Racheul! I knew you had it in you. It's so bad it was triggered by such a tragic situation!

This is so beautiful and poignant! I actually cried when reading it. The raw emotions you are feeling really comes through in your words!

hugs,
Grammy Gail


butchiesmom's Signature
May You Fly with Eagles
Run with Wolves
Walk with Buffalos
and
Always be my Friend

Add Post to del.icio.usFurl this Post!Reddit!Submit This Post To Netscape!Submit This Post To Newsvine!Share Post on Facebook
Reply With Quote

  post #3     Quote this post in a PM
Old 05-01-2008, 06:14 PM
Member Information
Real Name: racheul
Age: Private Capricorn 2 Country:
angelic mamma
crazymamma5 Surfs The Web With:
My Mood:
 
Join Date: Jan 13 2008
Last Online: 07-03-2008 10:21 AM
Location: Mcintyre,Pa
Posts: 78 Threads: 8
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
Instant Messaging Info Is Private
Thank you! Every time I read it I cry and can't believe it came to me while I was in the shower. I love your new signature.


crazymamma5's Signature


Life's a bitch then you die!!!!




RACHEUL

Add Post to del.icio.usFurl this Post!Reddit!Submit This Post To Netscape!Submit This Post To Newsvine!Share Post on Facebook
Reply With Quote

  post #4     Quote this post in a PM
Old 05-01-2008, 06:16 PM
 
Member Information
Real Name: Gail
Age: Private Scorpio 2 Country:
Member Blog Entries: 5
Moderator
butchiesmom Surfs The Web With:
My Mood:
 
Join Date: Oct 20 2006
Last Online: Today 02:47 AM
Location: In a trailer, on a hill.
Posts: 635 Threads: 56
Thanks: 8
Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts
Instant Messaging Info Is Private
Awards Showcase
Contributor Award Titanium Friend Award 
Total Awards: 2
Rating: Not Rated
Thanks, I borrowed it off the email you sent me, thought it was so beautiful!
Grammy Gail


butchiesmom's Signature
May You Fly with Eagles
Run with Wolves
Walk with Buffalos
and
Always be my Friend

Add Post to del.icio.usFurl this Post!Reddit!Submit This Post To Netscape!Submit This Post To Newsvine!Share Post on Facebook
Reply With Quote

  post #5     Quote this post in a PM
Old 05-02-2008, 11:05 PM
 
Member Information
Real Name: Therese
2 Country:
Member Blog Entries: 2
Moderator
nomadicrhymer Surfs The Web With:
My Mood:
 
Join Date: Nov 14 2006
Last Online: Yesterday 05:04 AM
Location: San Dimas, CA
Posts: 1,897 Threads: 122
Thanks: 4
Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post
Instant Messaging Info Is Private
Awards Showcase
The Kewlness Award Contributor Award #2 Active Award 
Total Awards: 3
Rating: 4 Votes / 4.00 Average
You have written a heartbreaking poem about the loss of a special person to many varied parts of a family, and the inability to deal with it...very well done crazymamma!

Nomad


nomadicrhymer's Signature

Excellence is the result of caring more than others think is wise, risking more than others think is safe, dreaming more than others think is practical, and expecting more than others think is possible."

Add Post to del.icio.usFurl this Post!Reddit!Submit This Post To Netscape!Submit This Post To Newsvine!Share Post on Facebook
Reply With Quote

  post #6     Quote this post in a PM
Old 05-09-2008, 07:08 PM
Member Information
Real Name: racheul
Age: Private Capricorn 2 Country:
angelic mamma
crazymamma5 Surfs The Web With:
My Mood:
 
Join Date: Jan 13 2008
Last Online: 07-03-2008 10:21 AM
Location: Mcintyre,Pa
Posts: 78 Threads: 8
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
Instant Messaging Info Is Private
thank you so much nomad! the thing is he is not gone yet and not sure what will happen now. this was wrote to reflect my feelings that i have been dealing with because of what is going on with my brother. i wrote an essay about him also called rob.


crazymamma5's Signature


Life's a bitch then you die!!!!




RACHEUL

Add Post to del.icio.usFurl this Post!Reddit!Submit This Post To Netscape!Submit This Post To Newsvine!Share Post on Facebook
Reply With Quote

  post #7     Quote this post in a PM
Old 05-09-2008, 07:30 PM
Member Information
Real Name: Sarah
Age: Private Taurus 2 Country:
Member Blog Entries: 6
Proud Poet
SarahNSH Surfs The Web With:
My Mood:
 
Join Date: Apr 11 2008
Last Online: Today 02:39 AM
Posts: 139 Threads: 10
Thanks: 5
Thanked 11 Times in 9 Posts
Instant Messaging Info Is Private
Awards Showcase
Brilliant Idea Award Sweetest Member Award 
Total Awards: 2
Rating: Not Rated
Hello!

This is a beautiful poem with the pure and intense emotions with reading it. I can relate to your poem even though I haven't lost many people myself... and I think that it's a wonderful thing when you can personally relate to a poem that you read. I think that you did a great job and I enjoyed reading it!
Add Post to del.icio.usFurl this Post!Reddit!Submit This Post To Netscape!Submit This Post To Newsvine!Share Post on Facebook
Reply With Quote

  post #8     Quote this post in a PM
Old 05-12-2008, 09:02 AM
Member Information
Real Name: racheul
Age: Private Capricorn 2 Country:
angelic mamma
crazymamma5 Surfs The Web With:
My Mood:
 
Join Date: Jan 13 2008
Last Online: 07-03-2008 10:21 AM
Location: Mcintyre,Pa
Posts: 78 Threads: 8
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
Instant Messaging Info Is Private
thank you so much for your comments. that is what i wanted to get across that way no matter whether you have experienced it or not the emotions would come across enough to feel it inside your self.


crazymamma5's Signature


Life's a bitch then you die!!!!




RACHEUL

Add Post to del.icio.us