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Old 05-31-2008, 10:33 AM
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~BUBBLE BATH FELICITY~

Rippling nimbus cloud burst
of effervescent bubbles engulf
my bare breasted body
floating in an Elysian atmosphere
of Champaign kissed nirvana.

My Casanova joins me in
bubble bath Paradise entwined
in effervescent waves of ecstasy.

He caresses my naked breasts.
He kisses my shivering lips.
He seduces my mystic spirit of Venus
with his seductive soul of Mars.

Passion flows through every fiber
of my essence as his canine wolf touch
excites my feline vixen body
once upon a fantasy in my
effervescent bubble bath felicity.

© 2001 Karen Davies



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Old 05-31-2008, 05:13 PM
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Hello Moonchild!

This is just a very indulgent and seductive poem right here... and now I want to take a bubble bath to experience all of this. I really enjoyed your choice of words, imagery, and how every last line had some beautiful imagery going with it. Like with this particular line right here with the first stanza:

of Champaign kissed nirvana.

And I noticed with each last line it had that going and I really enjoyed how the ending of each stanza had such a great play of words and images. I especially liked the 3rd and 4th stanza with how you described the difference between the man and woman. Her being the spirit of Venus and him being the soul of Mars, that was very unique and interesting perspective.

With the 4th stanza I liked how you compared his canine wolf touch and her being feline vixen, which really works well together and how they intertwine with each other. I could literally see this image play out as I read it and I think that you did a wonderful job with the metaphors and the words you chose to weave into your poem. This is such a highly sensual, seductive poem that I really did enjoy reading.

Thank you for sharing your poem and I hope that you keep on writing away!
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Oh thank you so much Sarah for your in-depth reply
to my poem! I appreciate your every encouraging word.
I'm glad you liked the imagery and metaphors and that you enjoyed it.
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wow sensual romantic erotic and beautiful simply elegant penning my sweet moonchild
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Thanks so very much Thomas.
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