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Emotional Romantic In love or have poetry that tugs at ones heartstrings? Please share your romantic tear-jerkers & emotionally draining pieces right here in this forum.

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Old 05-17-2008, 11:09 PM
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My darkness begins as soon as we are apart
my soul spurns me because we’re not together
Then my thoughts entices my heart to articulate
Just how amazing and unique you are
With your incredible smile and those delicious ruby-red lips
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Your soft delicate flesh, yet I speak so brazenly
Always stumbling and wallowing in the depths of my mind
if I were ever to be alone with you
I would surrender my heart and soul
And make spontaneous impassioned love to you
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Old 05-19-2008, 11:10 AM
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I love all the poems I read by you, including this one. Its nice to read a good love poem from time to time, and this one definitly makes the cut for me.

Keep writing Bear, you are very creative and gifted
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Dear Bear,

This is another special poem. I too love your poems as they touch the heart and soul...every time. Yes, keep'm coming!

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Thank you so much Deep__poet for your terrific comment all your comments makes me happy and smile
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This is a lovely love poem filled with passion and honesty.
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