yxaonidme

I am a girl who always hide,
A things which makes me cry,
For me, suicide is the best thing try
To escape this life I'll die

That night I cry so loud
Screaming this words through the clouds
Beyond this suicide for him
A buring desire within

Do you know what it's like to be
To kill yourself which everyone can see,
I wish you we're nearby
So you can see how I'll die

In the willow of sinful thoughts
Electricuted by these watts
As the gazing razors on my seducting wrist bleeds,
Hoping my suicide will succeeds.

I'm Standing here in darkness
Imagining I'm in a black abyss
Waiting till I finally die
So now I'll say goodbye...

deep_poet86

Yxaonidme, I just noticed you were new, so welcome to the forums.

I just wanted to say I enjoyed both of your poems you posted so far, both are very sad and depressing, not that that is a bad thing though. You are young with much gift and talent and I thank you for sharing it with us here in this fine forum.

I write a lot of sad poetry myself as well, based on my life growing up when I was a teenager, because those were very tough years for me, I to have wrote many sucicidal poems and such. It is nice to read someone else's dark poetry though and not just my own.

Now I hope I am not stepping out of line when I say this, but I hope you are not suicidal. When I read your poem it feels like its your feelings speaking, but I could be wrong it could just be a poem that you wrote. Many people including myself have been down that road and its not pretty... Now I am sorry if I went to far or something with what I said, but I have slight worry for you thats all, and I hope you are ok...

Thank you very much for sharing though and I hope to read more by you

yxaonidme

hi, thanks for that comment. I appreciate your concern for me..But to tell you the truth yes I am in suicide and i guess every week i bleed...but dont worry i just do it when i get depressed.. i dont know why I am still alive right now,,,,but i am happy that there is someone who cares for me thanks you

have a nice day