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Emotional Romantic In love or have poetry that tugs at ones heartstrings? Please share your romantic tear-jerkers & emotionally draining pieces right here in this forum.
in true gemini moods..

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Old 03-25-2008, 05:01 AM
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Dreams

I dream of golden mornings,
warm, bright and heavenly tinted
rising slowly from a blue grey horizon
singing songs of gay seasons

I dream of dew, chrystal clear diamonds
shining in the morning sun
on green manicured grass
and stretches of lilies, roses and daisies
soft petals and sweet scents
and never ending lawns

I dream of horses
musky scents on a dusty countryside
riding in the midday heat
watching over hares and antelopes
as they graze in unfathomable peace

I dream of evenings
soft dusks and starlight
bonfires in the desert plains
burning the night away

I dream of you
walking into my life
making me your angel, filling me with your passion
you are the ONE DREAM
that surely came true.
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Old 03-25-2008, 07:56 AM
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I dream of poetry with crystal clear images, rhythm even and easy to read. Oh, this isn't a dream!

I could see everything: golden mornings, grass studded with diamond dew shining in the sun, stretches of flowers and lawn, smell the country air as I rode horseback and see the dusk as it covered the sun, the stars bright in the sky! Could feel the passion as your dream came true!

Poetry is meant to tell a story with minimal words, I think, you did a great job on this Terryanne (love that name!)

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Wow excellent penning Terryanne I can see the images of misty mornings, the beauty of the sunset I can feel the passion and love surrounding you as you sit by the bonfire as the fiery red embers crackle and drift into the air
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Thank you Gail, much appreciated!!!
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hi terryanne,

i caught the inference to gemini and had to read as am I. Not sure of the connection, other than the fact that gemini's are the best lovers lol.

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Hey Zaac, Gemini's are dreamers too!and best lovers too, we can brag can't we!!
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