erikestabrook

let me be liquid so I can melt into you,
let me be pure again,

your perfume to bloom,
but thats not what I long to smell,
I long to smell the salts on your skin,
hanging on au natural,

I'll do my part, no fire will hold me back,
I can escape with a newborns path,

Inflicting, you inflict so many holes in me,
yet you sustain my whole irregardlessly,

I hope I've not fallen for just a vision,
a vision could try me broken-hearted,

How sweet the spoils of you must be?
In this tender, surrender,
there lies no way for escape,

so let me be liquid so I can melt into you,
let me be wise so we never grow tired of each other.

PaintedDiary

My Dearest Erik ,

This was such a dreamy piece, that just radiates love, and a little lust, I might add, Hehehehe. LOVE the title!!! The lines I have quoted are just delicious. To think that someone would want to "melt" into me and smell the salts of my skin is new, lovely, and quite sexy Erik! Someone who longs to witness the spoil of me, and deem its sweetness. Are you sure, there is NOT a young lady who has captured our young poet's heart? lololol Smile lover boy, lol.

so let me be liquid so I can melt into you,
let me be wise so we never grow tired of each other
where the blend of us will never be in situ.

Sorry, your poem inspired me Erik! Wooohhhoooo!!!! I loved it, as I am huge fan of Estabrook Romanticism!!!!! Keep'm comin' poet!!!!!

{{{{~~~**KIM**~~~}}}}

erikestabrook

thanks Kim, I don't know what situ is though hopefully you'll clarify
yep I've found my romantic taste, I used to have such distain for that genre,

actually i'm still not sure why you insist on there being someone,
all the woman I know are married or don't like me,
but yes you got me to smile,
I'm love sick and actually grossing myself out on a re-read,
oh well I'm happy with this poem

Sally Roberts

Merry Meet Erik:
Oh what a romantic you are. Your poetry just melts the soul, like warm chocolate pouring down icecream.

Thanks for the great read!

Blessed be

erikestabrook

thanks Sally,

realy this poem was not my usual style
but styles are meant to be changed

Sally Roberts

Merry Meet Erik:

Meaningful and emotional poem indeed.

It's always good to challenges oneself to a different style of writing. I have so many different styles I can't keep up with them all.

One of my favorite things to do is go to Types of Poetry and challenge myself to write in a new style and structure.

It sure keeps me on my toes.


Blessed be

erikestabrook

thanks Sally i like challenging myself as well although not with sonnets they take work,
to me free-verse is better to express yourself anyways most people get lost in the structure of a sonnet

good you like trying other forms means your serious about poetry