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Emotional Romantic In love or have poetry that tugs at ones heartstrings? Please share your romantic tear-jerkers & emotionally draining pieces right here in this forum.

A Note to a Lover
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Old 04-25-2007, 12:14 AM
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A Note to a Lover



You asked me to write it down, and so I shall.

Perhaps by putting pen to paper, I can look upon the words,

and try to understand our connection.

Why You?.

Could it be because your voice gives me joy, at the end

of the day.

It's clear, it's full, strong, confident, an experienced voice.

Often it sounds loving, and caring, so I choose to believe,

most times that you care.

For the first time we enjoyed the fullness of our passion,

and experienced the depth of desire, ignoring the fear of possible rejections.

When mind, heart and body combine, a burst of energy

brings forth a sensation one can only describe as exquisite.

I need not explicitly detail the movements, only to say they are special,

they are intimate they are wonderful.

I love you my dearest one.

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Mrs Major.

This is soft... and
careing...

a moment of what's
happening in
your thoughts.

Needing to
find the truth
of your...

passions.

Giveing voice
to your inner
desires.

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Simply beautiful, Victoria! Well done!
You make your love shine out through every line!

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Dear Victoria,

Love radiates throughout this piece and is simply beautiful!This is subtle, real, open, and every word can be felt. That is one blessed man to share his life with a beautiful soul as yours. Thank you for a beautiful write Victoria!

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Thank you so very much for your review and comments...Yes indeed he was a wonderful man, and I adored him..He passed away, but I had written this for him after we had been on a extended vacation..It was a very special time for us...30th wedding anniversary.. Thanks again, I appreciate the visit...
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