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Emotional Romantic In love or have poetry that tugs at ones heartstrings? Please share your romantic tear-jerkers & emotionally draining pieces right here in this forum.

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Old 02-13-2008, 03:59 AM
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A POEM WITH A CLASSICAL FLAVOR

A POEM WITH A CLASSICAL FLAVOR


You take a thing whose nature is self-evident
and universally admitted, like wine

Judging its truth in the darkness of night
will be hard work, for sure

Better to do it in sunlight,
Then and not till then will you be able to make a sound
or judge its captivating taste


It is similar to its effect and I can be
fairly hustled to find out the other truths of its flavor

Then how was I, after this drinking
to resist this pretty woman, with her subtle manners,
her well-timed tears, her parenthetic sighs?

Lingering farewells,
joyful welcomes, judicious airs and graces, song and lyre--all
were brought to bear on us within an hour

What a finished mistress is this life
we lead, who has ruined many before

No, I will run away from her by way
of the Ionian Sea or the blue Aegean

No tremendous storm can harm me
though I like billows of water and whirlwinds and hail

On my way I was compelled to take in all sail
but got there eventually, and she

standing on the beach rock and leaning and smiling
hurled herself into my views and disagreements

all her judicious airs and graces forgotten
but, as I said earlier, take a thing whose nature is self-evident

and universally admitted, like this woman
or this man, and trail cables after them to break
the force of their united waves

You will not succeed
until you die from the effort, nameless soul on a beach

and what’s the use then
the dead do not make sounds or anything else
but only diffuse a bitter truth in the air, in all seasons





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Old 02-13-2008, 09:26 PM
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Wow Nikos ..... this one I quite enjoyed....... but do not understand why such a man as in this poem chooses the sea over a real live warm woman? I gave this an excellent rating because it is that...

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Nikos, I would like to say you have a beautifully deep poem here. I like the way you have shown the realities of life and love in your work. Well Done Sir!!



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Thanks Mysty and Spider.

Mysty: The man here does not avoid the woman in the end, though he attempts to do so without success. He arrives on the beach and she is there, waiting. His journey though the high seas was futile. One cannot avoid life (the woman is life here for him). If one does, death reigns (the end). Attraction for the lady wins and destroys all his reservations and attempts to resist her in the end. And that is in keeping with classical ethics which dictate that union between man and woman is the supreme experience in life and all further life derives from it. They were right, the ancients, were they not?
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