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Emotional Romantic In love or have poetry that tugs at ones heartstrings? Please share your romantic tear-jerkers & emotionally draining pieces right here in this forum.

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Old 07-02-2008, 10:55 PM
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Reflection
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From the first time we chatted
You touched my soul
From the very first picture you sent
I wanted to see the reflection
Of your crystal blue eyes in mine
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Some days it feels like so long ago,
Sometimes just like yesterday
That we touched, held hands
And strolled side by side
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The reflection of your crystal blue eyes
Captured my lonely heart
Some days it feels like so long ago
Sometimes like just yesterday
The first time we said “I love you
And I saw forever

In the reflection of your crystal blue eyes
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Old 07-03-2008, 12:59 AM
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Hello Bear!

This is such a sweet, romantic poem that you have here and was really quite moving for me to read too. And, with the content of the poem too I'm guessing that this is an online relationship from the lines of sending off that first picture and that this maybe first started online? Or, at least, this is my guess. I really do love the emotions in this poem and how you repeat her crystal blue eyes which I feel ties the poem together nicely. This is my first poem that I reviewed of yours and I must say that I really did enjoy it. Thank you for sharing and keep on writing away!



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Thank you so much Sara. She is a very special woman in my life even thou we arent chatting much or writing much anymore but it a relationship hwere I let her go because I wanted her to have a better life that I could have ever given her and her daughter. we are still friends and chat once every blue moon but thats ok I didnt want to be in the way if something every came her way and it has and she and her daughter are very happy and she does miss me and chatting with me.
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i like the repetition of the blue eyes, it keeps an image burning in the mind as you read the poem. i love your style, its so original and romantic



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Bear,

Long time no see. I enjoyed this work but do have a question about the last few lines.

should "I seen" be "I saw".

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Thank you so much Chelsea it's what I feel in my heart
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Hi Jer well been sick alot lately and thank you so much for your correction and comment
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