Emotional RomanticIn love or have poetry that tugs at ones heartstrings? Please share your romantic tear-jerkers & emotionally draining pieces right here in this forum. It doesn't portray talent as much as it does feelings.
It's What You Do to Me
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Biography: “To be nobody but yourself in a world that's doing its best to make you somebody else, is to fight the hardest battle you are ever going to fight. Never stop fighting.” -E. E. Cummings
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It's What You Do to Me
You taught me to never be shy
To always be true and never lie
You opened my eyes and made me see
In my heart, I knew you belonged to me
Now you're away and I don't know why
You were my drug, you gave me that high
With you my heart filled with glee
You made me the best I could ever be
Now without you in my life, I cry
For only you my love, I would die.
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Biography: “To be nobody but yourself in a world that's doing its best to make you somebody else, is to fight the hardest battle you are ever going to fight. Never stop fighting.” -E. E. Cummings
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Thank you very much for the feedback it is always appreciated
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I've always been simple and sweet when it comes to romantic things (usually) thank you
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Well, this is a different side of you that is revealed with this poem of yours... I've mainly read your darker poems and this is a softer and sweeter side. Though, with the ending it does have that slightly dark edge to it that I like and you just seem to have this talent of having very strong/powerful ending lines for your poems. Which is great and I actually have a hard time with ending my poems strongly, so I really think that your endings of your poems are one of my favorite parts and I look forward to them.
Overall, I enjoyed the softness to this poem and seeing this other side to your poetry. I also liked the title of your poem too and it caught my attention when I was scrolling down the list of Poetry to read. Altogether, I'm glad I came across this poem and thank you for sharing!
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I do have some softer stuff that I have written, I tend to be a die hard romantic at times :] Thank you, I used to struggle with endings before and now they come much easier. I have a few other soft earlier ones that I might put up as well ;] Thank you again
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