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Emotional Romantic In love or have poetry that tugs at ones heartstrings? Please share your romantic tear-jerkers & emotionally draining pieces right here in this forum.

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Old 01-15-2008, 04:37 PM
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I wish you would come, sit on the green grass,
drink coffee in tanks, listen to birds and distant cars.
I want you to feel the sun warm your flesh as it browns.

We could drive to the coast, rent a giant tube,
squeeze through the hole together, opposite sides, our
stomachs meeting, on occasion, as we rock with the swells.

We’d drink margaritas from leather wine skins,
lie our heads back, close our eyes, and breathe the salty air,
spinning circles behind the breaking waves.



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Very lovely images Jolie.
I'm surprised no one has commented this yet.
I liked it and enjoyed. Beautiful, laid back write



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