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Old 07-24-2008, 11:53 PM
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Surrender to Desires
Surrender to Desires
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I surrender to her soft whispers
That ignites the fires of my souls passions
Wanting never to break free
My submitting heart uttered yes
Before my senses ever knew
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Her flesh as soft as silk
Sending a thirst surging through my veins
Springing forth the scent of my desire
Manacled to her lust
Shackled to where her fantasies exist
I’m to stunned to oppose
Mine is a sweet surrender
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Sensual shadows dance on the wall
A sultry voice softly whispering my name
Slowly the fires wane
Singed desire, breathless sighs
I savor the taste of her on my lips
Her fragrance on my pillow
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Lingering hunger as days go slowly by
Waking during dreams of whispered desire
Stirring the embers of the fire
Wishing to hear her sultry voice
As I surrender to her exploding ecstacy
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"Her flesh as soft as silk"

i have always used silk as a referance in my poetry so it is nice to read a poem with an author that has the same romantic taste as i.

your whole poem produces a beautifully erotic atmosphere and i really enjoyed it.
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Thank you so very very much I love the word silk and sometimes I use velvety to describe somethigns I am so happy you found this erotic or sensual and also happy you enjoyed it
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