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Emotional Romantic In love or have poetry that tugs at ones heartstrings? Please share your romantic tear-jerkers & emotionally draining pieces right here in this forum.

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Old 05-25-2008, 05:31 PM
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Sweet Betrayal
My mind split's to encircle your entity
Struggling with boiling brutality
The haze of red; bloodthirsty lies
This grief difficult to disguise.
I whip my limbs in the sharp dance of sin
Fire scorching the soles of my feet
My body is nude and gleaming in firelight
The fiercness of my love causes you to retreat
Yet what a stunning feat.
To bless a blind man with sight
Show him the beauty of the light
Then steal his gift and cast him into night.
Oh-beauty so pure yet cast in shadow
The tigress placently posing as the doe
The Queen of Innocense stained with woe
Leaveing demons to viciously bask in her glow.
The sweet betrayal-as most have conqured my soul.

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Old 05-26-2008, 05:48 PM
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Wowwwwww

I got to say it again, Wowwwwww!

"My mind split's to encircle your entity", You know this kind of reminds me of Mrs. Pac Man! I'm a have to watch out for you cause this is so hot it might burn!
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Hey AE,

I agree.......this is some writing here! Wow...the fiery language used explodes the poem and the images burn the mind and are everlasting. Outstanding wordsmithing and one cannot..just cannot read this just once. We are one phenomenal writing community! Thank you for sharing! Shew!

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i really appreciate that i find your compliments...incredible. wow, i really appreciate that. thank you so much
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Excellent Write Anonymous!! I found myself reading this twice to suffer the dangers from within your pen!



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ah thank you curtis. i haven't seen you here in a while
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Whew!
That was some steamy writing
Acctually I really enjoyed that poem and read it a couple times
Very lovely poem, Anonymous Encounter
Thanks for sharin and keep em coming



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well thank you. i haven't seen you here that long so i'll look for more of your stuff. thanks for the comment
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