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Emotional Romantic In love or have poetry that tugs at ones heartstrings? Please share your romantic tear-jerkers & emotionally draining pieces right here in this forum.

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Take a piece of my Heart
Been a while.. xD SOrry for that..

Anyways, here's my latest poem, and for you people who have read my other poems.. when you read this you'll probably notice that things haven't been better since last time I posted..


Take a piece of my Heart
My heart is like an open book,
everyone can come and sign.
But take a serious look,
do I look like I'm fine?

I'm surprised noone can see through me,
through this wall, a wall of lies.
How can noone see the dark hole in me,
behind my happy mask of disguise?

So take a piece of my heart,
like everyone always do.
I'm already torn apart,
wouldn't hurt more if you took a piece too.
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