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Emotional Romantic In love or have poetry that tugs at ones heartstrings? Please share your romantic tear-jerkers & emotionally draining pieces right here in this forum.
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Old 05-09-2007, 05:16 PM
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Tears surge as my heart pounds..
My hands shake with anticipation..
What do I say? My heart speaks only of you..
As your beauty comes into focus..
My thoughts are yours, forever yours..

As I ponder this heavy heart, I often wonder, quietly, why?
Another day has passed me by; one that found my empty arms..
If wishes could be true, then I’d be with you..
It’s hard being your nobody, trying hard to be your somebody..

If winds could talk, they’d tell a tale that fills the soul with love and warmth…
And just having known you, my life is for the better…
For no one has made me happier, filling my life as completely…
As you had made me, caressing me with your smile when our eyes meet..

Now, as the sun settles into night, loneliness reigns, Oh the pain…
Yes, it’s hard being your nobody, trying hard to be your somebody…
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Old 05-10-2007, 06:35 AM
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KEN - this poem is just BEAUTIFUL - the words ring true and the emotion seems like my own story. Yet I contemplate such heartfelt words:

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If winds could talk, they’d tell a tale that fills the soul with love and warmth…
And just having known you, my life is for the better…
Yeah - the line about "if winds could talk..." that's deep!
A really heartfelt poem that kinda makes my soul want to weep.
I appreciate you sharing this beautiful work with us

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Full of emotion and pain...wonderful write! I think we all are here at some point in our lives...a hard place to stand.
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Now, as the sun settles into night, loneliness reigns, Oh the pain…
Yes, it’s hard being your nobody, trying hard to be your somebody…
Every day the echos
are the same...

you got them words
right on in this.

Yes..

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Tears surge as my heart pounds..
My hands shake with anticipation..
What do I say? My heart speaks only of you..
As your beauty comes into focus..
My thoughts are yours, forever yours..
we all know you've
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A classic beautiful poem, that has me speechless. Simply beautiful. Thank you for sharing this, as I am in awe.

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