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Old 05-16-2007, 06:44 PM
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Tender are the moments
Tender are the moments
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When I look into your eyes
I see the beauty of your heart,
That warms to the depth of my soul.

The first time that we danced close
I can smell the fragrance of white roses,
As I kissed you the first time.
~
My heart is pumping fiery lava
As the time I notice
Your soft quivering touch
Capturing that moment in my mind.
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You rest your head on my chest
And my heart beat entices you.
Into the passion I feel for you
As I whisper “ I Love You”
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Time has changed everything
Expect the love we share.
And Tender are the Moments,
That I have with you
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Old 05-20-2007, 02:57 AM
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Wow .... I like this Bear. My favorite lines are "And Tender are the Moments,
That I have with you exquisite writing.

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Thank you so much Mysty I am very happy you enjoy my poems
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I really do love reading your poems. Everything you write about is beautiful, your writing is so peaceful and real. This one was great, again thanks for sharing your lovely works.
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wow Thank you so much DEEP POET for your wonderful comment and it makes me happy that you enjoy reading my writes
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