TFL - Poetry in Color Forum
 


Poetry in Color Forum
Donation Goal For Private Hosting 2009
Help us get better hosting = make your donation today!
We Have Received $160 Towards Our Goal Of $750
21.33% Of Our Goal Has Been Reached




Welcome To The JPiC Community.





All times are GMT -4. The time now is 02:12 AM.
Official Forum Language Is English. Translate Below:
Click Here To Join JPiC Forum.

Kewl Stuff JPiC Radio Daily Horoscope JPiC Arcade Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read
    JPiC Portal » Main Forum Index » Poetic Colours » Emotional Romantic

Emotional Romantic In love or have poetry that tugs at ones heartstrings? Please share your romantic tear-jerkers & emotionally draining pieces right here in this forum.

TFL
this thread has 1 replies and has been viewed 47 times


Post New Thread  Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 12-03-2008, 05:03 PM
  post #1
~U KNO~

Rolanda's Avatar

Rolanda Is The Original Thread Starter
My Mood:
Real Name: Kelsey Rozenboom
Last Online: 12-25-2008 12:50 PM
Location: Iowa
A/S/L:
Join Date: Aug 23 2008
Posts: 18 Threads: 12
Thanks: 0
Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts
Biography: I'm adopted from Korea and love to write for fun, I'm a college student and am studying to become an attourney
Surfs The Web With:
Rolanda has not received any JPiC Member Awards.
Rolanda has not championed any arcade games.
Instant Message Info Is Private.
TFL

The moment I saw him
with big blue eyes and
perfectly blonde hair
I knew he was something special

There was this connection
a bond, him and I
with no one I've had before

He fills me with warmth
that Florida sunshine
an ocean breeze
a beautiful day

A smile replaces the frown
on my face
just hearing his words
linger softly in my ear

Across the universe
his soul lies from mine
As I sit
waiting here
for my knight in shining armour
to return for me again.



Signed By Rolanda


Forum Signatures Are Not Shown To Unregistered Guests.
CLICK HERE to Register Your Free JPiC Forum Account.

Rolanda is offline   Reply With Quote
JPiC Forum Sponsor Links • This Forum is enhanced with content-revelevant advertisings...
JPiC Whole-Post Ad Policy
Whole-Post advertisings are shown only to JPiC Forum For Writers' Guests. Once successfully registered, such ads will not be shown. CLICK HERE to register your 100% FREE JPiC account today and become an active Member of our Community for Poets & Writers! CLICK HERE for advertising opportunities.

Old 12-04-2008, 04:18 PM
  post #2
Moderator

nomadicrhymer's Avatar

My Mood:
Real Name: Therese
Last Online: Yesterday 05:28 PM
Location: San Dimas, CA
A/S/L:
Join Date: Nov 14 2006
Posts: 1,952 Threads: 121
Member Blog Entries: 2
Thanks: 9
Thanked 14 Times in 14 Posts
Biography: divorced, 4 children, 2 still at home...planning to retire in Belize soon!
Surfs The Web With:
nomadicrhymer has not championed any arcade games.
Instant Message Info Is Private.
Hi Kelsey...what is TFL? I think my age is showing! LOL

This is a cool poem, and what's cool is that the reader can take different things away from it...I somehow got the idea that you were talking about nature...though you probably aren't. The blue eyes and the blond hair could be that Florida sea and the sun itself I feel...providing you with warmth and making you feel special...the sun and the sea are two of my favorite things so that's my interpretation... nice piece!

Nomad



Signed By nomadicrhymer


Forum Signatures Are Not Shown To Unregistered Guests.
CLICK HERE to Register Your Free JPiC Forum Account.

nomadicrhymer is offline   Reply With Quote
Post New Thread  Reply

  JPiC Portal » Main Forum Index » Poetic Colours » Emotional Romantic



Additional Options
Bookmarks

Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Forum Jump

Page generated in 0.18072 seconds with 20 queries

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53