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"THIRST QUENCHER." (Poem/Song).
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Old 04-07-2007, 09:41 AM
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"THIRST QUENCHER." (Poem/Song).

"THIRST QUENCHER." (Love Song-Lyrics/ Poem). Author: Stardust. (Written 3-22-2007).

Let me love you one more time!!
Let me take you to Fairyland!!
Let me show you my love for you!!
IŽll love you...
ŽTill the end of times.

You dwell inside my heart,
A place from where youŽll never part.
IŽll quench all your emotions
With sensations beyond proportions.

I know, you wonŽt ever quench
The volcanoe living in me.
I know, you will resist,
And I wouldnŽt ever insist...

REFRAIN:
IŽll quench -if you want- all your thirst for love,
IŽm your love-thirst quencher from above,
Your water fountain of life
Will be filled to the brim.
IŽm thirsty of your love!!...
YouŽll never ask for more!!...

Author: Starry. (This is a Love Song-Lyrics/ Poem dedicated to my fellowman).

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Old 06-03-2007, 06:07 PM
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Lovely love song Starry:

I really loved this one hon.

Thank you very much for sharing.

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Dear Sally: Thank you so much, sweet Sally, for your kind appraisal and comments over my little poem/song!! I always like to see other poets reading my work. It gives me some kind of encouragement to keep on writing. You see, this one was a challenge...My mate told me that, I was unable to write Love Songs or Love Poems. So, this little poem was born then...I think, I can write anything, if I really wanted to...Thank you again, sweet Sally, for reading my work and sharing your comments with me!! I must go to your poems and read them, one of these days...You see, I am too tired lately. I just canŽt do too many things at the same time. I am still so busy taking care of my 2 sick elderly Aunts, and that kind of responsible job prevents me from doing what I love the most: WRITING WITH A PASSION. Well, IŽll see you soon...Take care, honey!! (((HUGS))) Starry.
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You are very welcome starry

I understand how it is to take care of ill relatives and such. I too had my share of helping with family.

It is rewarding and very tiring as well. And it takes up most of one's personal time. So I am very happy you had a liitle respite to write.

Thanks again hon . I loved your song/poem

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Dear Sally: WOW!!...I feel so honoured and impressed, when I see you reading and making your wise appraisals over my little work. Thank you, honey, for writing to me!! I certainly appreciate your kindness. YES!! I know..., how it feels to do many things at the same time. However, I can NEVER STOP WRITING with a passion, since it is my only love...At times, I do it more often than others. But, IŽll always do it, unless I am dead...Well, I would like to read some of your poems. I am sure, IŽll soon do it. I must find a quiet minute and relax myself, in order to enjoy your wonderful Poetry. (((HUGS))) Sincerely, Starry.
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Dear sweet friend, TREE:
I send you another one for you to review. It is just the lyrics, no music. I would love this one to become a REAL SONG WITH MUSIC ON...What do you say, dear TREE??
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