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Emotional Romantic In love or have poetry that tugs at ones heartstrings? Please share your romantic tear-jerkers & emotionally draining pieces right here in this forum.

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Old 09-07-2006, 02:05 AM
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Throbbing
Throbbing more throbbing
it's pounding, every time
she pops into my mind.

Following the drips of her
brine, squeezing through
strips of time.
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Old 09-08-2006, 04:44 AM
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Ooh..I like this write. Few words but so powerful.

"squeezing through
strips of time."


Very nicely done.



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Short and straight to the point through your graphic imagery! I think we've all met someone like this at one time or another! Well done and write ON!



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Old 09-08-2006, 09:39 PM
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Hy Terry, Yes everything is a strip of time with how busy most are these days, have to squeeze through those moments some how.

Hy Tree, you give such precise reviews.

Thanks ladys.
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Wow. Not only is it easy to relate to your poem, but it has a very melodious ring to it as well. The last few words in particular are very powerful. Great work!
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graphic imagery my ass - I'm tryna collect some Kleenex brand facial tissues to wipe the moistness off my...... nose and the rest of my t-zone lol

very nicely written haiku duo - me likes very much

Thanx for the share ABAE - looking forward to much much more of your enticint words

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Hi Mbironneau,

Thanks for the nice review and encouragements
of this haiku, hope you enjoy future views.
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Hi Jacquii,

You said:

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graphic imagery my ass - I'm tryna collect some Kleenex brand facial tissues to wipe the moistness off my...... nose and the rest of my t-zone lol
Ahhhh you had me LOL, next time 'm gona
have to leave some Kleenex at the side of
the entrys thats entered here, you think??

Thanks Again for your review.
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