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Emotional Romantic In love or have poetry that tugs at ones heartstrings? Please share your romantic tear-jerkers & emotionally draining pieces right here in this forum.

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Old 11-02-2006, 11:49 PM
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Till The End Of Time

I haven't shared anything of mine until now, finally have a moment to go in and snag some of what I have written.

The memory of their teenage years
Cried out that their youth return,
But deep inside she already knew
That forever this wish would burn.

She placed her hand upon his chest
The tears fell from her eyes,
For seventy years they’d shared their love
At ninety-two he had died.

Oh, how she’d miss his gentle touch
And the love from this handsome man,
She leaned down and kissed his lips
Then gently squeezed his hand.

At home she gazed into their mirror
And envisions a very young bride,
His promise echoed, “Till the end of time,”
And she knew he had never lied.

She quietly laid down on their feather bed
She listened as the big clock chimed,
“I’ll see you my love,” she smiled and said
“My heart has reached the end of time.”

Linda May Spivey~Bjorklund
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Old 11-04-2006, 09:06 PM
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This is very touching. For those of us who are well on the other side of mid-life, it speaks to something inside us that those who are still very young cannot yet comprehend -- the reality of dealing with the mortality of those we love is far more soul wrenching than dealing with the prospect of our own lives ending. Thank you for sharing this. It says something that is in the hearts and minds of a lot of us.



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a beauty of a poem quite the gem
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Thank you for the kind words and for seeing what was deep inside the poem's words.
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Oh, how beautiful. I have to say, you've left me with goosebumps.
Just a very touching poem.
Great work.
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Thank you all for your warm responses, it means a lot to me to know that my words can touch others in the fashion it was meant to be.
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Dear Lindamay,

Wow, where do I begin? This has left my skin tingling, and my eyes misty as well. I thought this was exquisite, well executed, and simply beautiful! I love, when I can "feel" the words painted. Brilliant! Take Care.

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wow! I have goosebumps just from your enthusiasm... thank you so much for making me feel like a real writer!
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This was really a brilliant peice of writing i really enjoyed it so much great work
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