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Emotional Romantic In love or have poetry that tugs at ones heartstrings? Please share your romantic tear-jerkers & emotionally draining pieces right here in this forum.

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Old 12-07-2006, 12:47 PM
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Tomorrow

Tomorrow, when you wake up,
And you see my empty chair,
I know that you will feel alone,
You値l sense that I知 not there,
You値l feel I致e gone, that I致e moved on,
But Dear, it isn稚 true,
For tomorrow when you wake up,
I will still be there with you.

Tomorrow, when you breakfast,
And you make just half as much,
Reach out with heart, with mind and soul,
And feel a tender touch,
Tomorrow when you start your day,
Please know that I am there,
For in your heart I really am,
I知 with you everywhere.

Tomorrow, when you travel through,
Your busy, tiresome day,
I知 there with you, in all you do,
As you go on your way,
Tomorrow, when you dim the light;
Then say your nightly prayers,
I will abide, there at your side
To share your worldly cares.

Someday, when you have uttered all,
Your farewells and goodbyes,
When those you love stand all about
With naught but tearful eyes,
When you have crossed that threshold that,
Leads to eternity,
Tomorrow will be yesterday,
And you値l be here with me.
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Old 12-10-2006, 01:47 PM
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Ron this is lovely...a tribute to the one you love, filled with rich imagery, well-orchestrated rhyme and flow...great piece!

write on,
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your words are very kind and generous. thank you.
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you are so welcome and I look for more of your work...

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Dear Ron,

This was simply exquisite. You have filled the affective domain of my brain with some lovely images. Well executed, balanced, and beautiful. I look forward to reading more of your work. Thank you for sharing this with us.

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Come on now.... I am about to get a swelled head with all your flattery. Then if I get a hat for Christmas it will not fit me.
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