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Emotional Romantic In love or have poetry that tugs at ones heartstrings? Please share your romantic tear-jerkers & emotionally draining pieces right here in this forum.

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Old 06-08-2007, 08:44 PM
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I sensed the word in my mind,
a bright hologram of you.

My hand’s stunted reach stopped short,
our ghosts faded hurriedly.

Perhaps a future vision,
when what we’ve teleported

ties our pathways together,
in a more permanent light.

Happy illuminations,
for two pent up souls – released!

But, the touch is not for now…
Yet, a word is in my mind…

A bright hologram of you
and glad visions to hold dear.

A place where time is our friend
And our faded hope can touch.


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Old 06-09-2007, 12:02 AM
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Your poem is ABSOLUTELY GORGEOUS! I love the 2-stanza format - it's kinda abstract, such a delicate structure that if you blink - you need to read it once more. Such an enjoyable piece to read, would sound beautifully read! The way you tie the lines together is professionally stunning.

My favorite stanzas - is the entire poem: 'tis beautifully scribed! I will quote though...

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I sensed the word in my mind,
a bright hologram of you....

...A bright hologram of you
and glad visions to hold dear.

A place where time is our friend
And our faded hope can touch.
Poem begins beautifully and culminates beautifully. I actually just recently saw an interesting show about Greek mythology... Your poem inspires vision of Pandora's box and the "hope" that never "escaped"

Thoroughly enjoyable poesy and I look forward to more of your writing.
Thanx for the sharing AND again = Welcome to JPiC!

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Ms J is right on! This really IS an awesome poem!
Loved it from start to finish - no rough spots at all!

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smooth flowing and powerful things are happening in this euphoric sensation that you made

p.s. your now the only new guy who's poetry I like



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smooth flowing and powerful things are happening in this euphoric sensation that you made

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huh? what about me - I'm new

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But, the touch is not for now…
Yet, a word is in my mind…

A place where time is our friend
And our faded hope can touch.
© Jerry P. Quinn
June 7th, 2007
Dear Jerry,

This was absolutely exquisite! I love the two stanza format. Lends itself to let the audience pause and absorb all the magic. Fantabulous Write!!

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