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True Love
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Equally self-evident as the birds on the morningsky,
as the breathing air, as the life of my.
Equally real as the grass in the park,
as the sun, as the night so dark.
Equally self-evident as everything you see,
equally real is the love I give thee.
Uhu!
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Biography: Jacquii Cooke is a 32 year old Black Poet from Oak Ridge, Tennessee. As Webmistress of Poetry in Color Forum, she is devoted to the more abstract styles, especially those with a strong feminine voice that center around the topic of redemption and righting the wrongs of past transgressions.
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LOL - persistent aren't we XD
About this poem - I love the premise of it - The "real" metaphor you offer to your own love is a novel idea.
Well done!
Thanx for the sharing - And apologies for being so late
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Awwuh, please don't bump... Don't need to!! (The mods do it every so often - notify one of us if we miss it again 'kay? Dono how this one got away!)
This piece was strikingly simple, yet dripping with meaning. Short but sweet! The switching between 'old' english ("thee") and 'new' english ('you') was a little wierd for me - but it fit neatly inside the rhyme. Keeps nicely inside a simple rhythm - the whole piece is easy on the ears and sweet in the heart - yyeeaaahhh definately a nice read!!! Thanks so much for sharing this, and so sorry to see it went unnoticed for this long!
LOL - persistent aren't we XD
About this poem - I love the premise of it - The "real" metaphor you offer to your own love is a novel idea.
Well done!
Thanx for the sharing - And apologies for being so late
Jacquii.
Thank you! No problems.. haha ;P
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Originally Posted by ~Serenity~
Awwuh, please don't bump... Don't need to!! (The mods do it every so often - notify one of us if we miss it again 'kay? Dono how this one got away!)
This piece was strikingly simple, yet dripping with meaning. Short but sweet! The switching between 'old' english ("thee") and 'new' english ('you') was a little wierd for me - but it fit neatly inside the rhyme. Keeps nicely inside a simple rhythm - the whole piece is easy on the ears and sweet in the heart - yyeeaaahhh definately a nice read!!! Thanks so much for sharing this, and so sorry to see it went unnoticed for this long!
Smiles!,
~Serenity~
O..ok, sorry.. but noone posted anythng =(
I know, that's what I like about it, it's so simple, so short, but yet so powerful
o.O I can agree with that actually.. thanks for the tip
Biography: Jacquii Cooke is a 32 year old Black Poet from Oak Ridge, Tennessee. As Webmistress of Poetry in Color Forum, she is devoted to the more abstract styles, especially those with a strong feminine voice that center around the topic of redemption and righting the wrongs of past transgressions.
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